Monday, 28 October 2013

BF2013: The Vacant Space...


The realisation of what God knew all along.
Vacant space within a pumping heart filled with His love.
A familiar voice whispering guidance to the willing ear.
 
The relief of what God felt all along.
Chambers beating faster with anticipation of release.
Words written and exuding the truth from a heavenly realm.
 
The response of what God heard all long.
The vacant space discovering the true and rightful occupant.
The blood spilled that in turn filled the pumping heart.
 
© Paula C. Whitehouse, 2013


7 comments:

  1. Love it. Many layers there ... So good xx

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    1. See reply below Michelle. Am on my phone...argh!

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  2. Nice job Paula. Debbie W. (OBS Facebook Group Leader)

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  3. Thanks Michelle! It has been a while since I've written any poetry. This is a tad deeper than my previous works. I found it comfortable writing this way too.Pxo

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    1. Thanks Jo! A little bit of poetic visulation. It was very freeing. Pxo

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